Language 7-13
If I take the swimming class, I could meet Marco afterward ____ Café Java ____ Locust Street.
If I take the swimming class, I could meet Marco afterward at Café Java on Locust Street.
In the following sentence, the underlined text is unnecessarily wordy or redundant. Select the answer option that is the best replacement. [In the event that a child is sick,] most employers are understanding about a parent's absence or late arrival.
If a child is sick,
Whether you like its brand of comedy or not, [it is doubtful that The Daily Show will disappear] from our TV screens anytime soon.
The Daily Show probably will not disappear
When the bell rang, Carla just was a few minutes away from finishing the last essay question.
When the bell rang, Carla was just a few minutes away from finishing the last essay question.
In the following sentence, the underlined text is unnecessarily wordy or redundant. Select the answer option that is the best replacement. They speak [repeatedly at every opportunity] about the importance of punctuality.
repeatedly
I can't decide whether to sign up for a class ____ yoga or ____ swimming.
I can't decide whether to sign up for a class in yoga or in swimming.
[In those days,] the White House staff could keep secret the seriousness of a president's health problems.
In the 1930s and 1940s,
You may stand in line for your flu shot only if you have already paid for it.
No Change
Pointing out the wonders of the universe, the audience was enthralled by the astronomer's presentation.
Pointing out the wonders of the universe, the astronomer enthralled the audience.
unnecessarily wordy or redundant. Select the answer option that is the best replacement. [In view of the fact that an emergency situation may develop,] parents need to have a [back-up plan for their children precisely in place.]
[Because an emergency may develop,] parents need to have a [back-up plan for their children.]
[Due to the fact that] most parents work, the policies of many companies are not [sufficient enough.]
[Because] most parents work, the policies of many companies are not [sufficient.]
Jon Stewart has made [an extremely unique] contribution to television news commentary.
a unique
Stewart is [really smart] and has a quick wit.
brilliant
[Many talented comedians are] on the The Daily Show.
No Change
During World War II, Roosevelt [did a good job as a speaker and inspired the nation] with his "fireside chats" on the radio.
spoke eloquently, inspiring the nation
Other comedy show guests have good one-liners prepared ahead of time, so [it is quite possible for them to] make fun of the host.
they try to
[To provide] flexibility for parents, other companies let employees work at home on some days.
No change
Some companies [now] have day-care centers [on site,] which help working parents with young children.
No Change
The Daily Show [was hosted] by Craig Kilborn for two years before Jon Stewart took over.
No Change
When Franklin Roosevelt died in 1945, Americans mourned the loss of a beloved leader who had [lifted them out of a depression.]
No Change
In the following sentence, the underlined text is unnecessarily wordy or redundant. Select the answer option that is the best replacement. [As far as some supervisors are concerned,] arriving late is never acceptable.
Some supervisors believe that
Selling at less than $3 a jar, the grocer praised Classico as an alternative to more expensive pasta sauces.
The grocer praised Classico, selling at less than $3 a jar, as an alternative to more expensive pasta sauces.
The yoga class meets early ____ the morning, ____ Saturdays
The yoga class meets early in the morning, on Saturdays.
After Roosevelt put people back to work and initiated Social Security, [his popularity soared]
No Change
The swimming class meets ___ 5:30 ____ the evening, so I could go after work.
The swimming class meets at 5:30 in the evening, so I could go after work.
[The Daily Show might possibly] become known as one of the greatest comedy shows of all time.
it is a possibility that The Daily Show will
By absorbing perspiration better than synthetic materials, wool helps you stay dry.
Absorbing perspiration better, synthetic materials do not keep you as dry as wool does.
According to the ad ____ the newspaper, I need to register in person for the class ____ February 3.
According to the ad in the newspaper, I need to register in person for the class onFebruary 3.
After the movie, we'll ride home ____ the bus and then listen to some music ____ the radio.
After the movie, we'll ride home on the bus and then listen to some music on the radio.
In the following sentence, the underlined text is unnecessarily wordy or redundant. Select the answer option that is the best replacement. Bosses who are not understanding may turn [beet red in color]because they are so angry that the employee [was tardy and showed up late.]
Bosses who are not understanding may turn [beet red] because they are so angry that the employee [showed up late.]
[Although] some employees need to get their children to school in the morning, they should try to arrive at work on time.
No Change
Due in February, the couple has started childbirth classes to get ready for the baby.
The couple has started childbirth classes to get ready for the baby, who is due in February.
Some comedy show guests [apparently become] embarrassed because they can't keep up with the host's humorous patter.
become
During the guest portion of a comedy show, the host sometimes [tends to challenge] his or her guests by asking them pointed questions.
challenges
Often advising her husband on the plight of the poor, Eleanor Roosevelt [was a champion] of women's rights as well
championed
While America's young men fought overseas, women [did most of the heavy work,] changing forever their role in the workforce.
joined the assembly lines as riveters and welders,
The story of the Roosevelt marriage [is about] a strained personal relationship coupled with a mutual dedication to country.
reveals
Maybe I will take the YMCA swimming class but practice yoga ____ home, especially____ Sundays.
Maybe I will take the YMCA swimming class but practice yoga at home, especially on Sundays.
Roosevelt's New Deal program [was great for] the American people, bringing color and light to replace the gloom of the Great Depression.
empowered
____ an hour, I'm meeting Marco ____ the Star Cinema, so I'll think about the YMCA courses later.
In an hour, I'm meeting Marco at the Star Cinema, so I'll think about the YMCA courses later.
Franklin Roosevelt's famous line "the only thing we have to fear is fear itself" [became important to] his presidency.
became the touchstone of
As a youngster, the most enjoyable stories were the folktales my grandparents told.
As a youngster, I preferred the folktales my grandparents told to any other stories.
The governor promised to cut $700 million from the state budget by reducing wasteful spending during his campaign.
During his campaign, the governor promised to cut $700 million from the state budget by reducing wasteful spending.
____ March, I'm going to take a class ____ the YMCA.
In March, I'm going to take a class at the YMCA.
[During the news summary,] the host might lampoon the president, lawmakers, and other government officials.
No Change
[Stricken with polio at the age of 39,] Roosevelt struggled with his disability throughout his presidency.
No Change
Because of the recession, my uncle lost almost all of his money and has little left for retirement.
No change
____ the Fourth of July, I can swim outside or practice yoga ____ the grass.
On the Fourth of July, I can swim outside or practice yoga on the grass.
In the following sentence, the underlined text is unnecessarily wordy or redundant. Select the answer option that is the best replacement. Supervisors may be upset if a worker shows up at [10 a.m. in the morning] rather than at 9 a.m.
10 a.m.
While playing tennis with Eva, Sean's left knee was bruised and the strings on his racket broke.
While Sean was playing tennis with Eva, he bruised his left knee and broke the strings on his racket.
