EOC Questions

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 15?

A misstep by just one student creates a visible flaw in the perfectly coordinated display

JT would like to add the following sentence to the first paragraph. Where is the most effective place to insert this sentence?

After sentence 4

What is the most effective way to revise sentence 21?

Also consider that many bottles are discarded into landfills, where the bottles release chemicals as they decompose over hundreds of years

What is the correct way to write sentence 5?

As I pull gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness teases my nostrils

Mimi wants Tio improves the transition between the third paragraph and the fourth paragraph. Which sentence can be added before sentence 19 to accomplish this goal?

Bottled water is a huge monetary expense, but the cost to our planet is even greater

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9?

Bottled water may be attractively packaged, but it is simply processed tap water

How should sentence 8 be changed?

Change Soccer to soccer

What change if any need to be made to sentence 6?

Change being to I am

What change should be made in sentence 14?

Change preferances to preferences

What change if any should be made to sentence 1?

Change the Colin to a comma

What change if any should be made in sentence 11?

Change to trying to to try

What change if any should be made in sentence 18?

Change whose to who's

JT wants to use a more appropriate transition in sentence 11. Which of the following can best replace furthermore in this sentence?

Instead

What change if any needs to be made to sentence 20?

No change needed

JT has included an extraneous sentence in his paper. Which of these sentences should be deleted from this paper?

Sentence 20

Mimis essay does not have a strong position statement. Which of the following sentences should replace sentence 6 to serve as an effective position statement?

These problems can be solved, however, if people choose to drink water from reusable containers instead of plastic bottles

Mimi wants to conclude her essay by motivating her readers to take action. Which of the following statements should she insert after sentence 29 to accomplish this goal?

We should make the decision today to be smart about our finances and responsible with our planet by opting for reusable water bottles