GRAMMAR PRACTICE, SENTENCES: Shifts in Point of View, paragraph editing

The paragraph contains several inconsistent shifts in point of view. Decide if the underlined selection needs to be revised or if it is correct as is. Since 2005, National Geographic and IBM have been conducting a collaborative effort to create the world's largest database of human genotypes. The collaboration, directed by Dr. Spencer Wells, is called the Genographic Project. You can learn more about it on National Geographic's website at https://genographic.nationalgeographic.com. The site includes a video that we can watch to learn about the process of collecting samples. More than six hundred thousand samples have been collected already. Evidence produced by the Genographic Project indicates that all humans originated in East Africa and that global migrations began about forty thousand years ago. The project teaches you that we humans have much in common genetically. Those who go to the website can also become participants if you are willing to pay for the testing supplies. Which option(s) below would be an acceptable revision of the underlined selection? teaches that teaches people that Both revisions are acceptable. No revision is necessary.

Both revisions are acceptable.

The paragraph contains several inconsistent shifts in point of view. Decide if the underlined selection needs to be revised or if it is correct as is. Since 2005, National Geographic and IBM have been conducting a collaborative effort to create the world's largest database of human genotypes. The collaboration, directed by Dr. Spencer Wells, is called the Genographic Project. You can learn more about it on National Geographic's website at https://genographic.nationalgeographic.com. The site includes a video that we can watch to learn about the process of collecting samples. More than six hundred thousand samples have been collected already. Evidence produced by the Genographic Project indicates that all humans originated in East Africa and that global migrations began about forty thousand years ago. The project teaches you that we humans have much in common genetically. Those who go to the website can also become participants if you are willing to pay for the testing supplies. Which option(s) below would be an acceptable revision of the underlined selection? those who are interested visitors Both revisions are acceptable. No revision is necessary.

Both revisions are acceptable.

The paragraph below contains several inconsistent shifts in point of view. Decide if the underlined selection needs to be revised or if it is correct as is. Since 2005, National Geographic and IBM have been conducting a collaborative effort to create the world's largest database of human genotypes. The collaboration, directed by Dr. Spencer Wells, is called the Genographic Project. You can learn more about it on National Geographic's website at https://genographic.nationalgeographic.com. The site includes a video that we can watch to learn about the process of collecting samples. More than six hundred thousand samples have been collected already. Evidence produced by the Genographic Project indicates that all humans originated in East Africa and that global migrations began about forty thousand years ago. The project teaches you that we humans have much in common genetically. Those who go to the website can also become participants if you are willing to pay for the testing supplies. Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the underlined selection? Interested readers We You and I No revision is necessary.

Interested readers

The paragraph contains several inconsistent shifts in point of view. Decide if the underlined selection needs to be revised or if it is correct as is. Since 2005, National Geographic and IBM have been conducting a collaborative effort to create the world's largest database of human genotypes. The collaboration, directed by Dr. Spencer Wells, is called the Genographic Project. You can learn more about it on National Geographic's website at https://genographic.nationalgeographic.com. The site includes a video that we can watch to learn about the process of collecting samples. More than six hundred thousand samples have been collected already. Evidence produced by the Genographic Project indicates that all humans originated in East Africa and that global migrations began about forty thousand years ago. The project teaches you that we humans have much in common genetically. Those who go to the website can also become participants if you are willing to pay for the testing supplies. Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the underlined selection? that humans that we that you and I No revision is necessary.

that humans

The paragraph contains several inconsistent shifts in point of view. Decide if the underlined selection needs to be revised or if it is correct as is. Since 2005, National Geographic and IBM have been conducting a collaborative effort to create the world's largest database of human genotypes. The collaboration, directed by Dr. Spencer Wells, is called the Genographic Project. You can learn more about it on National Geographic's website at https://genographic.nationalgeographic.com. The site includes a video that we can watch to learn about the process of collecting samples. More than six hundred thousand samples have been collected already. Evidence produced by the Genographic Project indicates that all humans originated in East Africa and that global migrations began about forty thousand years ago. The project teaches you that we humans have much in common genetically. Those who go to the website can also become participants if you are willing to pay for the testing supplies. Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the underlined selection? they we us people No revision is necessary.

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