The Conclusion

Example of a conclusion:

As I look back over my time in Colorado, I can say for sure that is where I learned to take responsibility for myself in such areas as meeting others, in work and finances, and in attitudes and values. Some of my learning experiences were painful, but they all helped me to grow and become the person I am today. I enjoyed my freedom, but as I learned, "With freedom comes responsibility."

The Conclusion

The first sentence of the concluding paragraph should restate the thesis using different words. The restatement does not have to be completely different, but it definitely should not be word for word the same as your thesis. In other words, say the same thing in a different way. The conclusion should restate the main points or draw a conclusion.

Some ways to end a conclusion:

• Solution to a problem • A question for the reader to think about • Answering the question you raised in your lead-in • A quotation that supports your points • Reference to the introduction or title

Framing Your Essay

When you end your essay with a reference to the beginning, you are framing the essay. This creates an essay that is unified and leaves the reader satisfied. This is not the only strategy you can use, but it is very effective.