Thesis Statement & Topic Sentence
thesis statement guidelines
1 sentence embedded/placed in intro body paragraphs should follow order of your reasons be concise and meaningful
3C'S
Controlling Idea Commentary Coherency
thesis formula
Subject + Truism/Position + Reasons
Topic Sentence formula
Topic/Reason + controlling ideas
Controlling Idea question
Why/how does your reason/topic support/prove your truism/position in the thesis?
thesis statement
a narrow or specific claim which is supported by the rest of the essay
remember for thesis
edit and revise thesis make sure reader is not left with questions do you body paragraphs support/connect back to your thesis?
without controlling idea
lack commentary, have nothing to connect back to keep it cohesive lead paper to a failing grade
topic sentence purpose
main idea of paragraph helps you stay focused on the topic of your paragraph transitions form one idea to another, one paragraph to another allows essay to flow from topic to topic to be coherent
what to avoid in topic sentence
quote fact going straight to specific example asking a question personal pronoun words such as like and can unclear/vague including reason NOT discussed in thesis
creating unity
reason is reiterated from thesis in topic sentence
Where do your topic sentences come from?
reasons stated in your thesis
what should a thesis avoid?
slang, contraction, unclear or vague wording, uncertainty, broadness, wordiness, only stating a fact, including absolutes, personal pronouns, refer to authors by 1st name, ride the fence
Thesis Statement purpose
states overall premise details text road-map for entire paper
topic sentence
the first sentence in a body paragraph does the same thing for a body paragraph as a thesis tells and organize body paragraph
mini thesis
topic sentence
what makes a strong topic sentence?
use keywords or phrases from thesis clear and concise use transitions