Grammar: Parallel Structure

Anahid seeks to gain practical experience, to learn effective strategies, and acquiring knowledge about education practices.

to acquire

The process of writing, revising, and to submit a manuscript for publication can take months.

submitting

Cannery Row, a novel by John Steinbeck, depicts the unpredictable and often troubling decisions of several characters as they attempt, fail, and—finally, after working hard—succeeding in throwing a party.

succeed

Due to new federal regulations, international travelers must consent not only to a fingerprint scan, but also are also agreeing to a retina exam.

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Three of the most important personal qualities for anyone who desires a career in customer service are humility, good manners, and, possibly most important, having a well-developed sense of humor.

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Henry had the luxury of choosing between serving as in-house counsel for a growing fast food company and being a speechwriter for the Secretary of State.

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The Trans-Pacific Partnership (TPP), one of the largest regional trade agreements ever negotiated, generated both praise and controversy for its approach to addressing environmental problems, redefining trade relationships, and synthesizing the diverse interests of the twelve involved countries.

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Thomas Edison's phonograph, an invention that recorded sound, first gained popularity as an entertainment device; it eventually went on to serve more practical applications, such as letter writing and dictation.

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Footgolf players must follow several rules, including wearing proper golf attire, kicking the ball in a single movement, and waiting to play until the ball has come to a complete rest.

No change.

The brain's hippocampus, which is responsible for location mapping and spatial navigation, may also help people to orient themselves socially, hierarchically, and with emotions.

emotionally.

Forensic anthropologists recover remains, have examined physical characteristics to determine geographical origins, and look for evidence of trauma.

examine

If you like to make robots, use 3D printers, or even experimenting with computerized numerical control (CNC) tools, you might want to find the "makers" in your area and collaborate!

experiment

Despite his charming monologues and easy manner, the late night host was naturally bashful, reclusive, and fearing public speaking.

fearful of public speaking.

Space Camp at the US Space and Rocket Center includes an aviation-themed challenge; participants use computer-based flight simulators as part of their intensive training to flying,_ react, and make decisions like a fighter pilot.

fly

Winston Churchill was an inspirational speaker, a brilliant war strategist, and he loved extravagant food.

a connoisseur of

The black-necked Aracari is a small toucan with a red stripe across its yellow belly, a healthy appetite for fruit, and has a large beak.

a large beak.

Regardless of a student's major, college is intended to teach communication, time management, and to be accountable.

accountability.

According to Dr. Thomas Fingar, a speaker at the Council for Foreign Relations in 2008, the intelligence community should not only develop a list of high priority questions, but also are advising the collector on the best way to obtain the answers.

advise

Grunge music, such as that of Pearl Jam and Nirvana, developed a reputation for being angsty,_ distorted guitar sounds, and high-energy performances.

angsty lyrics,

The moon contains crystalline igneous rocks, has breccias,_ and soil.

breccias

People praised Pushkin's ability to recognize the spirit of the Russian people, develop characters embodying this spirit, and choosing the perfect words to capture it on a simple piece of paper.

choose

Jill was kind, thoughtful, and being considerate to her friends.

considerate

George is neither witty nor can deliver jokes,_ but somehow he got his own late-night comedy show.

good at delivering jokes

The professor had a reputation for being both dreary and didn't like to wait.

impatient.

On a visit to the United States, Albert Einstein is known for saying that he liked American bathrooms, was despising Prohibition, and thought movies were an interesting but underdeveloped medium.

liked American bathrooms, despised Prohibition, and thought

The fennec fox hunts at night, digs out dens in sand, and mate for life.

mates

Hamlet is often characterized as rash, unpredictable, and he is often in a state of melancholy.

melancholic.

Originally published as a children's novel in 1900, The Wonderful Wizard of Oz by L. Frank Baum has been adapted into numerous genres, including musicals, being made into movies, a TV series, and a theme park attraction.

movies, a TV series, and a theme park attraction.

Despite the touristic appeal of its multicultural heritage, historical significance, and has numerous coastal towns,_ the Andalucia region of Spain struggles with nearly 40 percent unemployment.

multicultural heritage, historical significance, and coastal towns.

While still a caterpillar, the Large Blue butterfly gains entry to the nests of Myrmica ants by falling to the ground, to pretend to be one of the ants' own larvae, and hitching a ride back to the colony

pretending

Young children often find it easier to memorize lists of names by hearing, learning, and repeat simple, catchy tunes in which the list is made musical.

repeating

Beau could not decide whether he should become an astronaut, study medicine, or riding the garbage truck.

ride

Flying from the West Coast of the United States to the West Coast of Europe likely involves a long flight with a layover, but to sail takes much longer and requires that an individual navigate through the Panama Canal or round the tip of an entire continent.

sailing takes

Mild-mannered and indecisive Bob could not choose between transitioning to a career in education and stay in the field of law.

staying

Backpacking across Europe requires fortitude, stamina, and being strong.

strength.

Congress explicitly stated that the intent of the statute is to discourage bad-faith filing and curbing debtors' abuse of the bankruptcy system.

to curb

For her senior trip, Evie can either travel to the Bahamas with her best friend or is allowed to tour France with her French club.

tour

Rwandan conservationist Edwin Sabuhoro is taking a new approach to wildlife poaching prevention: luring poachers away from crime by trained them to become farmers.

training

After analyzing the rhythms in Ludwig van Beethoven's music, a team of cardiologists and music experts concluded that the composer may have been observing and, working from this process, to transpose the patterns of an irregular heartbeat.

transposing

Hair archaeologist Janet Stephens recreates ancient hairstyles, weaving with a needle, designing hairpieces, and uses period-appropriate styling tools.

using