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And then immediately cleaned off our plates, rinsed our dishes, and loaded the dishwasher.
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For everyone to see.
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Went to the store to buy a newspaper for his dad.
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Which made everyone upset.
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Desmond gave the kid a piece of candy and said sorry.
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Desmond gripped the handlebars and raced toward the boys.
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He didn't dare stop.
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He sees a gang of boys.
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He went to the store to buy a newspaper for his dad.
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The other boys laughed and shouted the mean word again and again.
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We immediately cleaned off our plates, rinsed our dishes, and loaded the dishwasher.
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He see a gang of boys.
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Desmond gave the kid a piece of candy and says sorry.
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Desmond gripped the handlebars and is racing away.
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