MUG #15

Each candidate must report all of their income irregardless of where the money came from.

Candidates must report all of their income regardless of the money's source.

Even though they didn't win the lacrosse players a collection of strong young women still found many reasons to be proud of their preformance.

Even though they didn't win, the lacrosse players, a collection of strong young women, still found many reasons to be proud of their performance.

I was craving pumpkin pie, unfortunately Luke ate the last peace.

I was craving pumpkin pie; unfortunately, Luke ate the last piece.

Typing furiously the essay was finished by Shelby just before the 3pm deadline.

Typing furiously, Shelby finished the essay just before the 3pm deadline.

Whether is one cause of famine but political strife is another cause of famine.

Weather is one cause of famine, but political strife is another.

When people have heart attacks you expereince pain in the left arm.

When people have heart attacks, they experience pain in their left arm.