First a Champion and Then a Hero
Sofia wants to add a quotation after sentence 25 to support the idea that she is trying to convey. Which of the following could best accomplish this goal?
A : "She was in front of me the whole race, so she deserved to finish in front of me no matter what it took," Vogel later commented.
Where should this be inserted?
B : After sentence 3
Sofia would like to add a quotation to the end of her paper to help bring it to an effective conclusion. Which of the following would be the most effective for her to add?
B : Looking back at the day that she both won a gold medal and came in last place, Vogel said, "I got more attention for helping Arden than for winning at state, but I don't mind. Sportsmanship is a much bigger deal than winning a race."
What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 12?
F : Realizing that she hadn't recovered from her previous race, she slowed her pace to a jog.
Which of the following could replace sentence 28 and provide a more effective transition between the fourth paragraph (sentences 20-27) and the fifth paragraph (sentence 28-32)?
H: In the days that followed, both girls were inundated with calls from the media.