Fiction "Somebody Wanted But So Then"

But

BUT tells us the conflict or the problem

Jack is seven years old. He has all his teeth. His friend has lost one or more teeth. They love to see new teeth grow. Jack wants to loose some teeth but he doesn't have any loose teeth. He wants to see new teeth grow like his friends. So he wiggles his teeth everyday to check. But he doesn't feel any loose teeth. Then a few days later he feels a loose tooth. Jack is so happy. Soon he will lose a tooth and meet the tooth fairy. What is the problem in the story?

But he does not have any loose teeth.

Jack is seven years old. He has all his teeth. His friend has lost one or more teeth. They love to see new teeth grow. Jack wants to lose some teeth but he doesn't have any loose teeth. He wants to see new teeth grow to like his friends. So he wiggles his teeth every day to check. But he doesn't feel any loose teeth. Then a few days later he feels a loose tooth. Jack is so happy. Soon he will lose a tooth and meet the tooth fairy. How does the story end ( solution)

Jack feels a loose tooth and he will soon meet the tooth fairy.

So

SO tells us the main events in the story

Jack is seven years old. He has all his teeth. His friend has lost one or more teeth. They love to see new teeth grow. Jack wants to lose some teeth but he doesn't have any loose teeth. He wants to see new teeth grow to like his friends. So he wiggles his teeth everyday to check. But he doesn't feel any loose teeth. Then a few days later he feels a loose tooth. Jack is so happy. Soon he will lose a tooth and meet the tooth fairy. What is the main event in the story?

So tells the main event. So Jack wiggles his teeth every day to check.

Then

THEN is the solution. What happens when the problem is solved?

Jack is seven years old. He has all his teeth. His friend has lost one or more teeth. They love to see new teeth grow. Jack wants to loose some teeth but he doesn't have any loose teeth. He wants to see new teeth grow like his friends. So he wiggles his teeth everyday to check. But he doesn't feel any loose teeth. Then a few days later he feels a loose tooth. Jack is so happy. Soon he will loose a tooth and meet the tooth fairy. Who is SOMEBODY in the story?

The central character is Jack.

Jack is seven years old. He has all his teeth. His friend has lost one or more teeth. They love to see new teeth grow. Jack wants to lose some teeth but he doesn't have any loose teeth. He wants to see new teeth grow to like his friends. So he wiggles his teeth every day to check. But he doesn't feel any loose teeth. Then a few days later he feels a loose tooth. Jack is so happy. Soon he will lose a tooth and meet the tooth fairy.What is the plot of the story?

The central character wanted to lose some teeth.

Somebody

The main character

Wanted

What the character wants. Tells us the theme or the plot.