Homework

Countries such as Finland, where school children are not given homework, regularly top international educational league tables and outperform nations where setting homework is the norm.

An example of "There is evidence to support the idea that homeworks does nothing to improve educational outcomes"

In conclusion, homework has some drawback, but I believe that the benefits outweigh them in the long term.

Conclusion

This is important for children to develop an independent study habit because this prepares them to work alone as adults

Emphasize of "For example, by doing mathematic exercises at home, students consolidate their understanding of the concepts taught by their teacher at school."

For example, by doing mathematic exercises at home, students consolidate their understanding of the concepts taught by their teacher at school.

Example of "By doing so, students must apply the knowledge that they have learnt in the classroom."

Rather than doing homeworks, children should be encouraged to play and do outdoor activities which is recognized to be beneficial to the perspective of brain development.

Further development idea follows "Secondly, many parents would agree that the school day is already long enough, and leaves their children too tired to do further study when they return home."

By doing so, students must apply the knowledge that they have learnt in the classroom.

Further development of "The main benefit of homework is that it encourages independent learning and problem solving, as children are challenged to work through tasks alone and at their own pace."

While there are some strong arguments the setting of homework, I believe that it is a necessary aspect of education.

Introduction - opinion

(People have different views whether or not require students to do assignment. ) People's opinions differ as to whether or not school children should be given homework.

Introduction - paraphrase "Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children"

(There is evidence to support the idea that homework does nothing to improve educational quality.) There is evidence to support the idea that homeworks does nothing to improve educational outcomes

One of reasons for "There are several reasons why people might argue that homework is an unnecessary burden on children."

Secondly, many parents would agree that the school day is already long enough, and leaves their children too tired to do further study when they return home.

One of reasons for "There are several reasons why people might argue that homework is an unnecessary burden on children." (hint: too tired to do)

(One benefit of doing homeworks is that children could practice independent learning and problem-solving skill, as they take on assignment in their own and at their own pace.) The main benefit of homework is that it encourages independent learning and problem solving, as children are challenged to work through tasks alone and at their own pace.

One supporting idea for "In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that homework has an important role to play in the schooling of children." (hint: encourage independent learning and problem-solving)